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About an Angel by ~p0etic-n0nsense:iconp0etic-n0nsense:



Walking
along the forlorn ocean;
the western shore is in melancholy.
Cold feet
sink into the sand
overrun by the wallowing tide.

I hear trickles of a song swim through the wind,
and I glance atop a glorious mountain.

Halo resting on a burried shoulder;
an angel weeps upon
her violin.

Plasmic tears strike up a
dysphoric symphony
that sends the purple
mountains to a depressing sleep.

Her body spins into a
hollow dance.
Her soul mourns to be heard.

Flashes of heavenly
white wings
send
majestic emotions across
the depleted valleys
for all the
lost to float through.
Her mind wishes of
an idyllic life;
she is a simple creature.

Drifting out across the feeble ocean,
a spectacular song fades away.
As the air turns silent,
an enigmatic angel
dances deep into the night
unaware she has been heard;
and a cold fog slowly
hides her from the world.
©2004-2010 ~p0etic-n0nsense
:iconp0etic-n0nsense:

Author's Comments

a lost, sad soul.

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:iconuncertaindreamer:
nice nice imagery
top notch

awesome, catch ya later~
:iconp0etic-n0nsense:
thanks dreamer

--
"Listen, real poetry doesn't say anything; it just ticks off the possibilities. Opens all doors. You can walk through anyone that suits you."
-Jim Morrison
:iconrider-on-the-storm:
wow...im in awe!!

Plasmic tears strike up a
dysphoric symphony
that sends the purple
mountains to a depressing sleep

Where do you come up with this stuff!!!

--
"in america as the media hushes
millions of eyes float to the marble
of time where a stroke causes a collapse"
- splinter (wallpaper)
:iconbrownlashed:
very impressed. nice job.
:iconerissiva:
All that angel imagry is mesmerising. Congrats on another keeper.

*postles it under Favvys*
:#1:

--
Dr. P Fenderson
PinkonBrown - weblog and art collective
:iconp0etic-n0nsense:
thanks for the fav! your comment means a lot.

--
"Listen, real poetry doesn't say anything; it just ticks off the possibilities. Opens all doors. You can walk through anyone that suits you."
-Jim Morrison
:iconstarlet00:
so beautiful........
i love it
wow

~:star:

--
If I can stop one heart from breaking,
I shall not live in vain;
If I can ease one life the aching,
Or cool one pain,
Or help one fainting robin
Unto his nest again,
I shall not live in vain.
--Emily Dickinson
:iconp0etic-n0nsense:
your amazing. thanks for the comment and fav =]

--
"Listen, real poetry doesn't say anything; it just ticks off the possibilities. Opens all doors. You can walk through anyone that suits you."
-Jim Morrison
:iconquetiapine:
this is wonderful
i love this section

Halo resting on a burried shoulder;
an angel weeps upon
her violin.

its fantastic... nice work
i am speachless

--
'Staring down the barrel of a hot metal 45
just another way to survive'

Dani California
RED HOT CHILI PEPPERS

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